don't waste your time on wasting time
escape his caress to escape distress
don't be a mistress trapped in loneliness
roxanne, don't put on the red dress
he's not worth the stress or digress
play your cards with finesse - let him guess,
don't undress, now look at the mess
it's like a game of chess, you want him to confess
now stop to obsess, don't say yes
you're not his to possess, change address
unless - you can stop him from this crime
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as you can see I went a little overboard with the rhyming =) Bored at work, what can I say. Hope you like it.
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Haha, jag gillar det, jag gillar det väldigt mycket. Det är en bra ändelse att rimma på, och det ger dikten ett sjuhelvetes tempo. Tummen upp.
That was fun! Not the topic you wrote about, but the rhyming - and it works too, very well! The rhymes fit in. I agree that it has a great pace, which works extremely well with the theme. Boring time at work can be great!
haha thanks guys =)
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